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Essay: Climate change and Pakistan

Written by Sara Ahmed (English)

A model essay with an outline, facts and examples, solutions and a conclusion, and the points that earn marks.

The task

Write an essay of about 300 words on climate change and its effects on Pakistan. Suggest what can be done about it.

Points that earn marks

  • Begin with a short definition and say why the topic matters to Pakistan.
  • Give the effects with real examples, such as heat, floods, melting glaciers and drought.
  • Explain the effect on the economy and on daily life.
  • Suggest solutions for the government, for farmers and for individuals.
  • Link the paragraphs and finish with a short conclusion.
  • Use accurate facts, formal language and correct spelling.

Model essay

Climate Change and Pakistan

Climate change is the long term rise in the temperature of the Earth and the changes in weather that follow from it. Pakistan produces only a small share of the gases that cause it, yet it is among the countries that suffer most from its effects.

The effects are already visible. Summers are hotter and heat waves have become more frequent in many cities. Glaciers in the north are melting faster, which first raises the flow of rivers and may later reduce it. Heavy rains and floods, such as those of 2022, have destroyed homes, crops and roads and caused great loss of life and property. In other regions, drought and shortage of water harm farmers and cattle.

These changes damage the economy. Agriculture depends on a steady supply of water and a stable climate, so floods and droughts reduce crops and raise the price of food. The cost of rebuilding after a disaster is also high and takes money away from schools and hospitals.

Pakistan can take several steps. It can plant more trees and protect forests, build better dams and drainage and plan towns away from flood plains. It can use more solar and wind power to reduce the burning of fossil fuels. Farmers can use crops that need less water and methods that save water. The public can help by saving energy, using public transport and not wasting water. International help is also needed, because the country cannot bear the whole cost alone.

In conclusion, climate change is a serious challenge, and the people and the government of Pakistan must work together to prepare for it and to reduce its effects.

About 278 words.

Useful phrases

  • is among the countries that suffer most
  • The effects are already visible
  • These changes damage
  • Pakistan can take several steps
  • International help is also needed
  • In conclusion

Common mistakes

  • Writing only general sentences with no real example.
  • Listing problems but giving no solutions.
  • Using facts that may not be true, such as exact figures that you are not sure of.
  • Mixing the causes with the effects in one paragraph.
  • Forgetting a conclusion.