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Essay: Environmental pollution

Written by Sara Ahmed (English)

A model essay with an outline, linked paragraphs and the points that earn marks.

The task

Write an essay of about 200 words on environmental pollution. Give its causes and effects, and say what can be done about it.

Points that earn marks

  • Write a title and begin with a short introduction that says what pollution is.
  • Use separate paragraphs for the causes, the effects and the solutions.
  • Give examples that are real and local, such as smoke from vehicles or waste in canals.
  • Link the paragraphs with words such as also, however and in conclusion.
  • Finish with a short conclusion and do not add new ideas in it.
  • Check the spelling, the tenses and the punctuation.

Model essay

Environmental Pollution

Pollution is the presence of harmful substances in the air, water and soil. It is one of the most serious problems of our time, and it affects people in every part of the world.

There are several causes of pollution. Factories and vehicles send smoke into the air, and many of them do not use filters. Waste from homes and industry is thrown into rivers and canals, which makes the water unsafe. The use of plastic bags is also a problem, because they do not decay and block drains.

The effects are severe. Polluted air causes diseases of the lungs and eyes, especially in children and old people. Dirty water spreads cholera and other diseases. Fish die in polluted rivers, and farmland loses its fertility.

We can reduce pollution if everyone plays a part. The government should make rules for factories and punish those who break them. Citizens can plant trees, use public transport, save water and throw rubbish in bins. Schools should teach children to care for their surroundings.

In conclusion, a clean environment is necessary for good health and for the future of our children. If we act now, we can protect our country for the generations to come.

About 203 words.

Useful phrases

  • is one of the most serious problems
  • There are several causes
  • The effects are severe
  • Everyone can play a part
  • In conclusion

Common mistakes

  • Writing one long paragraph with no outline.
  • Giving only causes and no solutions.
  • Using general statements with no example.
  • Adding a new idea in the conclusion.
  • Making spelling mistakes in common words.