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Essay: Social media, its benefits and its harms

Written by Sara Ahmed (English)

A model argumentative essay with an opening, benefits, harms, a way forward and a conclusion, with the points that earn marks.

The task

Write an essay of about 300 words on the topic: Social media, its benefits and its harms.

Points that earn marks

  • Open with a short introduction that states the topic and your main view in one or two sentences.
  • Give each benefit its own sentence or short paragraph and add one real example for it.
  • Do the same for the harms, so that both sides get fair space.
  • Write a paragraph with practical solutions and say who should act.
  • Close with a conclusion that does not repeat the introduction word for word.
  • Use linking words such as however, for this reason and in addition, and keep each paragraph to one main idea.

Model essay

Social media is now part of daily life for most students. A phone can connect a girl in a village to a teacher in a city, but the same phone can keep her awake until two in the morning. The effect of social media depends on how it is used.

The benefits are real. Students can join study groups, watch lessons on subjects that their school cannot offer, and ask questions of people who know the answer. Small businesses can reach customers without a shop. During emergencies such as floods, messages spread faster than any newspaper, and families find each other.

The harms are just as real. Time disappears quickly on a screen, and students who scroll for hours have less time for homework, sleep and exercise. False news travels as quickly as true news, and a rumour can hurt a person before anyone checks it. Many young people compare their own lives with edited pictures of others and feel that they are failing. Strangers can also use these sites to cheat or harass users.

The solution is not to ban social media but to use it with rules. Students should decide a fixed time each day for it and keep the phone out of the bedroom at night. They should check a report with a reliable source before they share it. Parents and teachers should explain the risks calmly instead of only forbidding the use. Schools can teach how to protect a password and how to report abuse.

In conclusion, social media is a tool, like a book or a knife. In careful hands it teaches and connects, and in careless hands it wastes time and causes harm. A wise student will keep control of the tool and not let the tool control the student.

About 296 words.

Useful phrases

  • The effect depends on how it is used
  • On the one hand… on the other hand
  • In addition
  • For this reason
  • The solution is not to… but to…
  • In conclusion

Common mistakes

  • Writing only the benefits or only the harms.
  • Starting with a long definition instead of getting to the point.
  • Giving general claims with no example.
  • Writing one long paragraph with no breaks.
  • Adding a new argument in the conclusion.